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Tom Merrill's avatar

I read the 3 short ones, long poems daunt me so I usually circumvent them.

What caught me about the trio of short ones was a certain distinction of language all 3 possess. Perhaps that fact alone will induce me to alter custom and tackle the longie.

In all 3 you are speaking at a higher level than most will find within grasp would be my guess.

I'm glad David put you up in the lights.

I also listened to your podcast with David. That was harder going, in part I think because your voice has a bit of gravelliness to it, which, combined with your speechspeed during the exchange, may explain why many words didn't come through to me. C'est la vie I guess.

En bref, hope to see you here again.

As a gift, in a separate reply box under this, if I can make it magically appear there, I'll include something by me, one which still represents my best advice.

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agnusde2017's avatar

I liked these poems. I thought the shifting rhyme scbemes and the subdued islands of the end rhymes contributed to a tone of reflective calmness. The rhymes and the rhythm never cross into boisterousness. The aural restraint of the sounds draws the reader into the poetry's universe of restraint.

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