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The word play’s a delight

That veils a deeper bite

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Mr. Martin's lines transported me to childhood, adolescence and early manhood. My childhood was spent among Dominican nuns in the days before cape, coif, veil, habit and ponderous beads were replaced by the modern fashion of blue jeans and tee shirts. I remember them in their somber, black capes, kneeling in the first rows before the altar at 7:00 a.m. mass. I studied with them and was pruned and shaped under the tender mercies of modern day daughters of the Inquisition.

When I was nineteen I returned to visit an old nun whom I had loved. She received me in a little reception room with two arm chairs and small mahogany tables that showed no sines of use or wear. The room was a living diorama of the election of silence and solitude. At the end of my visit, Sr. Hildegarde took me into the nuns' small chapel, where we knelt in the soft lighting, and shared a prayer. I bever saw her again after that day. Later I found that she had died nine years later. Mr. Martin's poetry evoked memories of that last meeting in the dim lighting and sweet scent of bee's wax candles. No lark was there, only the invisible, silent comfort of a Paraclete that I had left in the shadows of another day.

Mr. Martin ponders the tension between thought and deed. His poem drew me into the silence that bridges memory and reflection.

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