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"The truly great must disdain posthumous fame" is a quote I find agreeable. Maybe its author meant honesty was their preference and knew that "veritas odium parit."

Another I like is "The pest of society is egotists."

Just one more: "No picture of life can have any veracity that doesn't admit the odious facts."

Just dreaming in the wings. Must get back to American transcendentalism.

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To add a remark, the poem's style is what comes through to me most. Its theme is more elusive I found. The style struck me as good, but I'd need to reread it before I could be certain. I can admire style, but only from afar, since "art" in writing isn't my first concern. So I'll reread it.

The most interesting writing, to me, speaks plainly and clearly. Just noting my own taste. I'm not a believer in art for art's sake. I give primacy in my own effusions to speaking my mind as clearly as I can about matters I regard as most important.

The poem shows above-average command of the lingo. One line reminded me of Stevens, the last line of one of his stanzas, which line is a string of quite uncommon words. Was "fisc" one of them?

Anyway, you will follow your own lights.

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