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I think this is a highly sophisticated piece of writing. It surprised me a bit. It does not sound like anything I'd expect from the heart of Mormon territory especially. It has a bitterly grievous tone. Wholly understandable in the circumstances--but can you express yourself as freely at BYU for example?

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On rereading I wondered about "among," i.e. "a sapphire ... among lava." A bit like saying "a sapphire...among concrete." It seems like a number conflict.

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