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Elijah Dickinson's avatar

Well done. As I related to you before, it's a poem that illustrates clearly your talent.

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Stewart Burke's avatar

I especially savor the sense of wonder that comes when a part of a poem or other work of art affects me in a deeply personal way, all the more so when it evokes something the author probably never even consciously intended. For me, the first quatrain in verse III immediately called to mind a favorite part of my favorite work of literature, “Tale of Genji” by Lady Murasaki. That is to say, the chapter Sir Arthur Waley titled "Yugao" or “Evening Faces” in his classic English translation. Although "Yugao" in Japanese refers to a different flower than the lilac, the color purple figures prominently in “Tale of Genji”, and "murasaki" in fact means purple. Moreover, David’s “thousand flowery faces” reminded me of the myriad blooms of the award-winning roses my grandfather grew when I was a boy. Thank you, David. I almost feel guilty knowing your duties as editor necessarily draw you away from your own acts of composition. Spring Lilacs was such a joy to read and to have read, and I could hear you reciting it in my mind as I read it.

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