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Adam Sedia's avatar

Like any longer work of quality, this poem takes the reader on a journey - in this case from the beautiful to the sublime. As the scenery descends from the sunny Roman greenery into the dark catacombs, the focus of the poem at once becomes more sober, as if shedding the distractions of the Roman joie de vivre. Now we get to the real meat of the poem: a memento mori and a contemplation of the hereafter. You leave us with one of the best final lines I’ve read in a long time. Wonderful.

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Tom Merrill's avatar

If life here is a foretaste of any hereafter, I personally hope--fervently--there is no sequel. Should there be an afterlife, I see no reason at all for supposing either justice or mercy would be part of it. This comment is addressed to section V:

Shall the soul outstare

The sublime annihilations Time has bent

Towards his children? If such hope be true,

In it alone is justice ultimate,

Or mercy possible. It is no proof;

But a commitment, not just to the New

Jerusalem but to the old.

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