By Michael Yost
Beautiful and terrifying
Really insightful poem. I love it.
Profound and a delight to read
And all injustice end.
You start in diapers, and end in them, parents return to being babies in one way or another. Life is circular:
Only to end as they began,
Fragile freight of a circling hand
That flicks the feeble out in and in
And each back to his origin.
Best to aim for clarity.
delete first "in" in line \3
Was "Suffuses" intended
Beautiful and terrifying
Really insightful poem. I love it.
Profound and a delight to read
And all injustice end.
You start in diapers, and end in them, parents return to being babies in one way or another. Life is circular:
Only to end as they began,
Fragile freight of a circling hand
That flicks the feeble out in and in
And each back to his origin.
Best to aim for clarity.
delete first "in" in line \3
Was "Suffuses" intended